Ice Cream (Persuasive Writing)

I think Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has milk. Milk is good for our body and our bones because it gives  us more energy.  

Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has vitamins that make's us strong and healthy. Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because they are full of flavours that is delicious.

I think Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has sugar that makes you lazy.
Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has lollies inside that makes you crazy and hyper active. 

Most of all Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it will give you brain freeze especially when it's Winter. 
L-I WALT.. write a Persuasive writing about Ice Cream.

Te Tou

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Today I was studying about Te Tou from Reading a Book. These are some information from the book. Te Tou is really fun studying about it.

Living In The Moon! Yes? No?

 I think that I should live in the Moon because I can see all the Solar System.

I should live in the Moon because I can wear a space suite and also learn more information about the Moon. I can also learn about solar system and gather informations I did not know about before. 

I think that I should live in the Moon because it is not noisy in there, it is very peaceful. I think that I should live on he Moon because I can explore the planets. 

I think that I should live in the Moon because I can also make new friends and meet other people that I don't know. You should go to the Moon because you can taste the food that you have not tasted before from Earth.

Most of all you should live in the Moon because you will have lots of fun jumping high.

L-I.. WALT write a persuasive writing to persuade my reader about my argument.

How Could Adults Be Better.

                How Could Adults Be Better.

I believe adults could be better if they stop fighting because their children could do it to other people. 

I think adults should listen to children because they might remind them about something that is very important.

Adults should stop hitting because it could abuse  their children.

Adults should stop arguing because it will cause a big fight.

Most of all adults should teach their children good attitude and stop drinking and playing loud music at night because it will disturb people's sleep and last adults should think before they do.

L.I- W.A.L.T to persuade my reader how could adult's be better.

How a friend could be better.

             Friends could be better.
                                              
A friend should not be nasty and they should be loving and trust one another.

I like a friend that doesn't bully me because that person will get   bullied back. I also like a friend that don't fight with one another because it will just create a big problem.

A good friend should be gentle with one another by being helpful when they see other people getting hurt. They will get sad if someone won't  help them. They should not smack other people because it will hurt them.

Friends shouldn't tease other people because it will hurt their feelings. If I got teased I will get mad and tell the teacher.

Most of all if you see a friend that is lonely you should go play with them to have fun.

L-I WALT.. to persuade my reader about how a friend could be better.