Ice Cream (Persuasive Writing)

I think Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has milk. Milk is good for our body and our bones because it gives  us more energy.  

Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has vitamins that make's us strong and healthy. Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because they are full of flavours that is delicious.

I think Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has sugar that makes you lazy.
Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has lollies inside that makes you crazy and hyper active. 

Most of all Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it will give you brain freeze especially when it's Winter. 
L-I WALT.. write a Persuasive writing about Ice Cream.