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Tuesday 8 September 2015

Children Should Be Allowed To Eat Chocolate.

Children should be allowed to eat chocolate when ever they want to.

I think children should be allowed to eat chocolate because it has fruits and it is good for our body and our bones. It makes us strong. Children can eat chocolate because they have milk that makes our teeth grow and strong. I really love chocolate.

I think children should not eat chocolate because it has lots of sugar that makes you stay up late and makes you lazy. Children should not eat chocolate because it will make our teeth rotten. It also makes you hyper active.

Most of all children can be should be allowed to eat chocolate whenever they want to because its so sweet and delicious
L.I- W.A.L.T to persuade my reader that children should be allowed to eat chocolate

1 comment:

  1. I don't understand if your arguing on the point that chocolate is good or bad. It should be more clear Justice but overall you're a real story teller 😍

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