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Monday, 12 October 2015

Captured By Aliens!!!!

I need help! I just got captured by aliens and they want me to tell them about Earth, so I did.

I told them that there's a group of aliens that are already on Earth and they are killing people because they want them to move out of Earth. 

 Those aliens want to burn the whole world. They are also stealing other people things. I told them that they shall not go because they poisoned the people and place bombs in the building so they will die.

I told them not to go to Earth because the other alien's will kill them.
L-I.. WALT write a persuasive writing to persuade my reader about my argument.

Monday, 31 August 2015

Ice Cream (Persuasive Writing)

I think Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has milk. Milk is good for our body and our bones because it gives  us more energy.  

Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has vitamins that make's us strong and healthy. Children should be allowed to eat Ice Cream because they are full of flavours that is delicious.


I think Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has sugar that makes you lazy.

Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it has lollies inside that makes you crazy and hyper active. 

Most of all Children should not be allowed to eat Ice Cream because it will give you brain freeze especially when it's Winter. 

L-I WALT.. write a Persuasive writing about Ice Cream.

Friday, 5 June 2015

Time to play Badminton.

Yay! Its time to play Badminton! Last Friday my class played Badminton at the school hall.

First I had to do some warm ups. I jogged from one end of the room to the other side twice. My second warm up was to face the right and jog and jump twice to the other side and back. 

Next we got the racket and learned its part. Later on I learned how to hold it, and hit the shuttle. While I played coach Ben told us to get some space because we might hit someone .

After that I said thank you to coach Ben and went back to class. I enjoyed playing Badminton.

My Dairy.

Saturday 23 of May.

Today I went to Mt Roskil war memorial hall to celebrate my little cousins birthday. She turned 1 years old. Her name is Analise Grace Cali. It was very  fun because we got to play on the Jumping Castle, and got to blow out the candle with the birthday girl and the kids got a dance battle but I did not go. I had so much fun at her birthday.


WALT.. write a diary so I can remember.

Thursday, 30 April 2015

My Trip To The Beach With My Family.

My Family and I went to the beach on Saturday for a family gathering.

The first thing we did was to put the colourful umbrella up, because it was so hot, we also put it up because someone might get sunburn. Then we put a big towel underneath the umbrella. It was so shady under the umbrella.


Next,me and my cousin Francis went to collect shells,and we also collect kena's. Francis and I like to collect shells because we can play with them.


Then Francis, me, Anna,and my cousin ran to the bathroom to change into our swimming togs. We were splashing and swimming like mermaids and dophins. When big waves came we ran away. I loved playing with my cousins because they are fun.


Later on mum called us to come and eat. We ate some chicken on rice. My cousin and I went and changed our clothes.


Lastly my mum said to pack up so we can go home. I felt tired and exhuasted , but I still had fun.



Friday, 21 November 2014

Manaiakalani Film Festival.


Manaiakalani Film Festival

On 12.11.14 St Patrick’s School went to Sylvia Park to the Hoyts to watch the Manaiakalani Film Festival. There were lots of other schools there too, like Glenbrae school and many other schools.  

We were watching on an enormous screen. The first movie we watched was Room 8’s from St Patrick’s school. Their movie was called Its Not My Fault. The movie was quite funny because Johnny was laughing and being silly, I also like Kolio and Natalia’s clothes.

After Room 8’s film  it was Tamaki College’s Film. The name of their film was called Master Chef. Some of the seniors had to cook something, and the judge’s had to see if they are going to win or lose. The lady and the man cooked a cake and the man said to the lady “You put the egg last but the lady said no you need to to cook the egg. Then they took it to the judges. They lost.

Meanwhile it was Room 5’s Film I felt embarrassed because it was my turn. The movie was called the
Magic Students. It was about Room 5 turning Mrs
R into a toad. My favourite Film was It Not My Fault. Hehe.

Monday, 11 August 2014

A Sad Lovely Funeral.


A Sad Lovely Funeral.

On New years my family and I went to my uncles Funeral in my favourite country, Tonga.
My Family and I went to say goodbye and to pray for him but before that we had to go dress him up at the Hospital. He was dressed like  a angel.

Then we had to get his coffin and lay him down.

After that we went back home and got dressed fast because it started at 2.00pm because It started at 2.30 and we got dressed so fast.

Then the clock hit 1.00pm and we all waited for the priest to come, before that I said to my Mum I thought it started already she answered, “no,” then I said, “okay.”

Finally the priest came and he started to read the bible. There was 5 priest my family and I were crying.

I felt very sad, hungry, and tired at the same time.

Friday, 25 July 2014

In The School Holidays.

WALT use our plan to write a parahraph to introduce our recount.

I know I have achieved this when it has who,what,when,why,where It will have full sentences It will have a paragraph.

This is my Orientations

In the school holidays my family and I went to a wedding, to take photo and to give the ring. We had alot of fun.

Thursday, 29 May 2014

How To Play Stuck In The Mud


WALT to write the instructions to play Stuck In the Mud.
Title:   How to play an marvellous game called
Materials.
P.E gear.
Teacher.
Five or more friends.
Space.
Teacher.

Method
1.First you need to get changed to your P.E gear.
2.Now find a good, big space.
3.Then invite maybe 6 or more friends.
4.After that the person who is teaching you the game, will explain the rules. The teacher will need to pick a tagger.
5. It`s time to start the game, and everybody starts to run away from the tagger, but remember  try not to get tug by the tagger.
6. Next, if they do get tagged then they will have to go on to their front support.
7.Meanwhile, you need to wait for a person that has not been tugged to go under the person who got tagged.
8.When someone has already gone under you, you can stand up and run again.
9. Now enjoy your marvellous game that you just played friends.





Thursday, 15 May 2014

Mother`s day

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